eyes heavy with sleep
heart lonely with the distance of one thousand miles
pen falls out of fingertips
journal slides out of lap
might be half asleep already
but still i wonder
ponder
question
wish
the ponderings and wishes will presently liquify
like sun on a trickling brook
into brilliant dreams, radiant with color
i think my dreams tonight will be of
the land of pines & lakes
where fireflies flicker the night away
and brilliant stars spread a thick blanket over the darkness
one thousand miles away
This piece is literally sun on a trickling brook radiant with color. ;) Love how it flows so smoothly. <3
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A Lantern In Her Hand
The Inkpot Girl
Haha, thank you, Sophia! <3
DeleteThis is so beautiful <3
ReplyDeleteThank you for your lovely comment, Grace. <3
DeleteLovely. <3 I think I'm going to be dreaming about this too, today.
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You're a dear - thank you, Morning! <3
DeleteOoh, such a pretty poem! (Would you call it a poem? Anyway, it's pretty.) Thanks for commenting on my blog!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Maggie! <3 I don't know what to call it... fragments of my imagination, I suppose. :)
DeleteThis is so gorgeous! You have such a skill with words and I love reading your pieces. Keep it up! I'm a new follower.
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Thank you so much Sanjana! <3
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ReplyDeletethis is, like, the height of poetry. THE WORD PAINTING. how do you do that. this is gorgeous. also, your blog design is unbelievable, and your about page is all that i aspire to. FOLLOWING RIGHT NOW. <333
Olivia you are too sweet! Your encouragement means so much, especially as you are such a talented writer yourself! Thank you for such a lovely comment! <3 <3
Deletethis is lovely.
ReplyDeleteAnd I don't mean "oh, that's nice" lovely, but "MY GOODNESS I LOVE THIS" lovely.
xoxox,
-elissa
letters-to-jayna.blogspot.com
Your comment is lovely - thank you, Elissa! <3
Deletethe picture of the moon is breathtaking wow
ReplyDeleteThank you, Faith! <3
DeleteThis is absolutely gorgeous. <3
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Thank you, Lauren dear. <3
Delete*whisper*
ReplyDeleteyour blog is gorgeous.
the words you wrote are gorgeous.
the picture is gorgeous.
i didn't know so much gorgeous could exist on one blog. xD
// katie grace
a writer's faith
You're so sweet, Katie! Thank you. <3
Deleteyour writing overflows with luminous beauty. <3 <3
ReplyDeleteThank you dear. <3
DeleteI don't know why I did not read this before. So immensely lovely--the tranquility of your words.
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Prelude, you are beyond sweet - thank you! <3
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